Evaluation Feedback

After asking a small focus group, the most common suggestion for improvment was to not use the image of the tree on the album cover. Even though it is a natrual image that reflected the video, it is seen somewhat random as the album covers theme is illustarted and cartoon, so if anything unatrual. I agree with these comments and have therfore changed the back of the album cove from the tree image to more illustaions. This will ensure consistency throughout the album cover. Along with erasing the tree from the album cover i have also erased it on the poster. 

Here is what i originally designed...

...using audience feedback, i then continued the illustrated theme onto the back of the album cover and erased the tree...

The tower resembles fairy tales of princesses and princes which is romantic therefore reflects lyrical themes of the song. 

With the elimination if the tree i have also decided that the poster should not have the image either as this may be misleading and confusing for consumers. 

Storyboard

Here is my storyboard for my music video. I've tried to illustrate it as best as possible. The basic plot is a girl is in love with here friend and he doesn't know and is interested in someone else. There are various romantic moments between them as they stroll through the countryside with there friends. 

Shot List

Here is the shot list for my music video. I have planned each second of the song to allow filming and editing run smoothly.

Shot	Location	Shot Description	Framing	Movement	Transition	Action	Actors	Props	Time in song	Notes
1	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Medium shot	Low angle	Still	Cut	- Actors walking towards camera and kicking leaves at it	George Forsyth, George Lee, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert		0.01 - 0.04	Camera will be placed on the flow
2	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Medium shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Fade	- Sophie getting something out of her bag - Vicki walks by - George leaves Sophie to talk to Vicki	George Forsyth, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert	Handbag and a take away Coffee	0.05 - 0.11
3	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Fade	- Lip syncing the lyrics	Vicki Gilbert	Yellow paper in foreground	0.12 - 0.15
4	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Medium shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Fade	- Sophie gazing at George	Sophie Durdle		0.16 - 0.18
5	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Close up shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Fade	- Sophie gazing at George	Sophie Durdle		0.19 - 0.20
6	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Long shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- George and Sophie looking at views	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle		0.21 - 0.22	Shot with actors facing back to camera
7	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Long shot	Low angle	Still	Cut	- Sophie leans on George and he moves away	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle		0.23 - 0.27
8	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Long shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Friends chatting on bench	George Forsyth, George Lee, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert		0.28 - 0.32
9	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Medium shot	Eye-level  angle	Still	Cut	- Sophie and George chatting	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle		0.33 - 0.34
10	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Close up shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Close up on Sophie looking at George	Sophie Durdle		0.35 - 0.36
11	My house	Close up shots	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Lip syncing the chorus, each actor gets a line each and as they sing it the others will be looking at them.	George Forsyth, Joshua Powis, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert	White, blue, green and yellow paper in foreground	0.37 - 0.57	I will use split screening to create an effect where the actors follow each other as they sing their part of the chorus.
12	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Close up shot	Eye-level angle	Panning shot	Cut	- Sophie is on the monkey bars	Sophie Durdle	Monkey bars in the park	0.58 - 1.00
13	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Extreme close up	High angle	Still	Fade	- Sophie’s hands slip off the monkey bars implying she has fallen	Sophie Durdle	Monkey bars in the park	1.01 - 1.02
14	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Medium shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Fade	- George has caught her after her fall	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle		1.03 - 1.05
15	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Medium shot	High angle shot looking down on feet swinging	Still	Fade	- Feet swinging	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle	Swings in the park	1.06 - 1.08
16	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Wide angle shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Sophie and George swinging on the swings	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle	Swings in the park	1.09 - 1.11
17	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Medium shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- George and Sophie sat on swings talking	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle	Swings in the park	1.12 - 1.15
18	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Close up shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- George talking and looking at Sophie	George Forsyth	Swings in the park	1.16 - 1.17
19	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Close up shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Fade	- Sophie listening to George	Sophie Durdle	Swings in the park	1.18 - 1.20
20	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Wide angle shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- George is talking to Vicki and ignoring Sophie, Sophie is annoyed at this	George Forsyth, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert	Tire swings in the park	1.21 - 1.26
21	My house	Close up shots	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Lip syncing the chorus, each actor gets a line each and as they sing it the others will be looking at them.	George Forsyth, Joshua Powis, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert	White, blue, green and yellow paper in foreground	1.27 - 1.48	I will use split screening to create an effect where the actors follow each other as they sing their part of the chorus.
22	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Lip syncing the lyrics	Sam Rutter		1.49 - 1.54	Introducing new actor, Sam is apart of the ;band’ and also features on the album cover
23	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Close up shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Sophie gazing at George	Sophie Durdle		1.55 - 1.58	Reinforcing that girl is in love
24	Shaftesbury - Gold Hill	Close up/Medium shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Fun & silly photos of Sophie and George will pop up	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle		1.59 - 2.00	Photos also featured on album cover
25	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level angle	Still	Cut	- Lip syncing the lyrics	Sam Rutter		2.01 - 2.05
26	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Close up	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Looking into each others eyeys	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle		2.06 - 2.07
27	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Dancing	Sophie Durdle		2.08 - 2.10
28	Shaftesbury - St James’ Park	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Moment at a kissing gate	George Forsyth, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert		2.10 - 2.20
29	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Miming the lyrics	Sam Rutter		2.21 - 2.24
30	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Close up	Low angle looking up	Panning slightly	Fade	- Shot of a heart with the sky reflecting through			2.25 - 2.29
31	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Fade	- Dancing	Sophie Durdle		2.30 - 2.33
32	Shaftesbury - Gold Hill	Long shot	Low angle	Still	Cut	- Walking up Gold Hill	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle	Handbag	2.34 - 2.38
33	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Dancing	Joshua Powis	Blue foreground	2.39 - 2.40
34	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Dancing	Sophie Durdle		2.41 - 2.42
35	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Dancing	Sam Rutter		2.43 - 2.44
36	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Dancing	Vicki Gilbert	Yellow foreground	2.45 - 2.46
37	Shaftesbury - Gold Hill	Long shot	High angle	Zooming out slightly	Cut	- Walking up Gold Hill	George Forsyth & Sophie Durdle	Hanbag	2.47 - 2.50
38	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Dancing	Vicki Gilbert	Yellow foreground	2.51 - 2.52
39	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Dancing	Sophie Durdle		2.53 - 2.54
40	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Dancing	George Forsyth	Green foreground	2.55 - 2.56
41	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Fade	- Dancing	Joshua Powis	Blue foreground	2.57 - 2.58
42	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Wide shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Friendship group are talking	George Forsyth, George Lee, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert	Mobiles	2.59 - 3.01
43	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still	Fade	- Dancing	Sam Rutter		3.02 - 3.04
44	Shaftesbury - Park walk	Long Shot	Eye-level	Still	Cut	- Finding out that girl is in love with him	George Forsyth, Sophie Durdle & Vicki Gilbert	Handbag	3.05 - 3.10
45	My house	Medium shot	Eye-level	Still		- End of sing, walk away	Joshua Powis	Blue foreground	3.11 - 3.14